My Poem Tornado alley what do you think?

As i looked down the street i seen the birds so quiet and meek.


This is when i knew something is coming this i see.





As we got in the house the wind were howling and smashing about.


We heard the sirens blasting a tornadoes coming everyone get your shoes.





As we lay in the cellar we heard the winds whistling and howling which seemed forever' while our teeth chattered.





Dad took sissy and held her so tight' i took little brother from my right.


We had 10 down there that windy night and we all talked and sang to forget this noisy freight.





30 Long minutes the house moved and shook we felt pieces just peel off and fly away' That's when we all held hands and began to pray.





40 minutes had come and gone Mama was screaming what in the world had she done wrong.


Dad got up and surveyed the house' as we heard him crying we were quiet as a church mouse.





The houses were gone where they used to be all that was left was mr.Johnson old pear tree.


The house was gone that day.

My Poem Tornado alley what do you think?
The poem is good but full of sadness,last time i told u to b positive and look at bright side of life.
Reply:Nice poem and i loved it a lot .you must of had expertise in these tornado's.. Really great and here;s a star
Reply:perfect
Reply:I think it needs a little polishing, but my first thought was "this girl has gone through that". It is awesome, even better, if it is just your imagination.
Reply:Veeeeerrrrrrryyyyyyyyyy chilling my friend %26lt;3








I live in Tornado Alley LOL, have for 15 years





This is either a grand insight or you have been there too @)~%26gt;~








Loved it, deep~n~chilling *^_^*
Reply:nice
Reply:I think it ish pwetty good! ^_^ honestly i think i said befor that you should be a poet...
Reply:REALLY GOOD


i think its based on something you have seen


or experienced



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