New one. thoughts please.?

LX3








You win some; you lose some


The game is often over too soon


Even with new shoes


You run into old issues


No matter how you choose to begin


It’s either sink or swim to the bitter end


Treading water only gets harder with time


Doubts will drown your hope


Life can never be lived to slow


Oh, no


You can’t let the show just go and go


You’re the director on this set


Expect the best


Dress to impress


Yourself is all that matters


Laughter


Love


Life


Let’s call it LX3


Now step out from under that tree


Stare the sun in the face and embrace the rest of your days


With nothing but a smile on your face

New one. thoughts please.?
I think you could come up with something better than "LX3", but I love the rest of the poem... I really liked "Treading water only gets harder with time". Couldn't have put it any better
Reply:thats cool dosnt LX3 mean like triple L sorta like triple X good movie back to the point its really good keep writing!!
Reply:Hey Teach Em----I love everything you write!





I love Even with new shoes you run into old issues!





Doubts will drown your hope---Life can never be lived slow





Oh no-----this is awesome, and I think this would make a cool





song! Play guitar?





Expect the best----dress to impress---yourself is all that matters------yes, I agree, putting your best foot forward no matter what! If it's your personal best, yet doesn't measure up to others, so what, personal best is all that counts!





I like embrace the rest of your days.....good ending.





Not so sure about LX3----not sure what that means, but you are young---this might be computer language or kid language, but to me I'm a bit confused.





Been a pleasure kid-----keep up the good work.



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