What do you think about this poem? What do you think it's about? Can you relate to it?

Alone %26amp; invisible in a corrupt world of deceit


Sadly, it is laughter %26amp; humiliation that they all seek


Look at the soles of my shoes, feeling indescribably down


As a single snowflake melts upon my cheek




















I am lost, nowhere to be found


In need of a secluded place, where I can feel safe %26amp; sound


An abundant bundle filled with broken promises %26amp; false pretension


Here I am, sitting on the floor of this empty town























I am talking to myself, what an odd obsession.


Humming a random tune just to break the silenced tension


The raven perched upon a tree branch gives me a sudden fright


But I try my very best to continue without further self-regression























I let go and let my eyes wander into the sky, where I see a glowing kite


%26amp; realize that the stars we have come to witness each %26amp; every night


Are the same stars that are part of everyone’s sight


I have finally opened my eyes to a world of delight

What do you think about this poem? What do you think it's about? Can you relate to it?
you were downtrodden and scared, you probably went through a trauma in your life. you always believed in yourself but found it hard to see this through the haze of sadness and grief. you came outh the other side and rediscovered joy. yes i can relate, and its a beautiful compostion, you are a talented person.
Reply:it sad and dark
Reply:that's beautiful


did you write it?





i can relate to it...... the last verse not so often though
Reply:is it about being bullied, and not having anyone to turn too.
Reply:sounds like u want us to do your homework for u
Reply:I think its beautiful. Thats the beauty of poetry. You can write anything from your point of view and make others fall into what you're saying
Reply:i like your poem, it can be interpreted to be about may things depending on the reader. i think it may be about an outcast someone who is not popular, who within themselves became more and more down, sad and depressed who thinks all are against them.


but then realises that there is life out there for them too.


i can relate to this poem as it seems much like some of my down time poems.
Reply:sounds like a lonely person
Reply:Oh what a very emotional poem,..so vivid and strong in words,,,do deep and penetrating...I was deeply touched...it made me feel the writers' emotions really........great experience to read one such expressive poem....carry on..you have the hands of a poetess................good luck!
Reply:I don't really understad it. I'm not into deep poetry.
Reply:Honestly, it sounds like every poem i've read by every 16 year old teenager trying to cope with their emotions. I applaud the fact that you're branching out to express yourself, but that's what poetry is - expressing yourself. Don't lean so heavily on what people think of it and if they relate to it. You're not writing for them, you're writing for YOU.
Reply:absolutely.beautiful


and.we.can.all.relate.to.it...this.wro...



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